today i am greatful for jill bringing her lambs to school there names are bouncy and blackberry and they are adorable cloud like balls of fluf here is the rime people keep singing.
Jill had 2 little lambs,
little lambs, little lambs,
Jill had 2 little lambs,
and one was black as cole,
they followed her to school 1 day,
school 1 day, school 1 day,
they followed her to school one day
and made the children laugh and play.
very good jasmine. That is a very nice rythme. I think you should put the capitals in for "today", "I", "Bouncy" and "Blackberry" and I think rime is spelt like this rythme.
ReplyDeletegreat rhyming Jasmine, but why did u do rhyme its awesome
ReplyDeleteha ha ha very funny but they actully didn't follow me to school mum brought them in the car I was quite embarressed when every one started singing that song !!!!
ReplyDeleteHi Jasmine,
ReplyDeleteI liked how you set out your work but I recommend you check for punctuation especially capital letters.