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How to write effective paragraphs here is the story I wrote with good paragraphs.

The castle walls shone in the moonlight. Its reflection shaking with the lakes ripples.

A shrieks as bats blocked out the moon.Suddenly a strange creature appeared and grabbed the princess."Let me go you fool."She screamed.Then the creature morphed into a dragon and with the princess gripped tightly in his talons he flew of the forest into the castle.

Then the dragon dropped suddenly down into a spooky cave."My father will have your head"she yelled angrily.” Not if your father pays the ransom of the eternity jewels first then he shan't be able to kill me.

Back at her castle her father was very worried his guards had found nothing suddenly a messenger burst through the door and said the strange creatures message aloud if you want to see your daughter alive pay my ransom of the eternity jewels and of course he played the ransom and the princess was free. Sadly it was not long till ruled the world.